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Deep, rich brown below
Thought of as filthy, useless,
but with such fragrance
Thought of as filthy, useless,
but with such fragrance
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"It's on the beach!"
It's on the beach.
Amy Dale fingered the pack of cigarettes in the baggy pocket of her jeans as she moved with the rush of the crowd towards the lake, her mind fuzzy with shock. Could it really have come to this? After all these years of hundreds of people searching, working, chasing, probing, trying to pin down the elusive Loch Ness 'monster' - after all her years of work, studying and scraping by and manuveuring with difficulty through her scanty network until she was part of the latest team sent searching for it - all of that ended like this?
It washed up on the shore?
Dead?
She left most of the crowd behind
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It was raining in Lancaster on September 3rd 1555, and Jane Ask loved the earthy smell that it coaxed out of the soil.
She wiped away the sheen of rainwater from her forehead with the back of her hand and set her small basket of nettles down by the front door. Later she would dry out the leaves and reduce them to a powder; the substance worked wonders on small wounds which refused to stop bleeding.
Jane had always been something of an herbalist. Growing up with only a father, and two older brothers from his first marriage, she had spent the majority of her childhood outdoors. Now practically a spinster at the age of twenty-two, she knew the
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Debra Mae was an astonishingly good programmer.
Her code always worked correctly the first time, and she never missed a deadline. Her workspace was immaculate, but curiously devoid of personal effects. No framed pictures, no toys, just her small collection of pens lined up according to color and an inbox for the occasional old-school paper input.
Her computer was equally immaculate. Nothing extra on her desktop, no stray icons. If one peeked at her browser history there’d be nothing there but work-related google searches and company stuff.
She dressed neatly but very plainly. I suspected she had four dresses in her wardrobe an
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I really like this, for a few reasons, actually. For one, the smell of earth actually is really nice, although nobody I know shares that opinion. But I think there's a lot more to this. The way the people think badly of the earth, despite its fragrance, as you said, and more importantly, due to its great importance. The earth these people are looking down upon is in fact the source of life itself and something they are fully dependent upon. It's literally impossible to imagine a world without it. Yet dirt is considered, well, dirty and undesirable.
This can be applied to our culture and society as well. The people that we owe everything to('lower-class' people, minorities) are looked down upon by the very world they created. Despite their fragrance(here being their personalities, humanity, general goodness), they are mistreated and considered filthy and useless. In fact, we'd be nothing without them, just as the world would be nothing without the earth that nourishes.
And, like appreciation of the smell of earth, to appreciate the 'fragrance' of these people is seen as an eccentricity, when it should be the absolute opposite.
So that's why I like this. Imagery(which was awesome) aside, this makes me think, which is what I really look for in literature. You, in three lines, caused all those thoughts above, and many more, in my, and probably others' minds. Which is great.
(as a side note, please forgive me if this is kind of incoherent. I've been known to have that problem sometimes.)
This can be applied to our culture and society as well. The people that we owe everything to('lower-class' people, minorities) are looked down upon by the very world they created. Despite their fragrance(here being their personalities, humanity, general goodness), they are mistreated and considered filthy and useless. In fact, we'd be nothing without them, just as the world would be nothing without the earth that nourishes.
And, like appreciation of the smell of earth, to appreciate the 'fragrance' of these people is seen as an eccentricity, when it should be the absolute opposite.
So that's why I like this. Imagery(which was awesome) aside, this makes me think, which is what I really look for in literature. You, in three lines, caused all those thoughts above, and many more, in my, and probably others' minds. Which is great.
(as a side note, please forgive me if this is kind of incoherent. I've been known to have that problem sometimes.)