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Looking back,
everything was so simple,
so pure.

Laughs everywhere,
not a care in the world
Those years were nice
Maybe even the best so far

But with age comes
a burden: knowledge.
To know life
is to truly know despair

So during the
worst of times,
I choose to forget
and be pure once more
Yep, another poem. I've got a bunch more that I'll be posting over some period of time. I'm trying to write poetry more often, since I don't have the time to write stories.

Let me know what you think! Any comments would be much appreciated!
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TheShanar's avatar
I enjoyed this poem, as it conveys what you are trying to say quite nicely. It feels a little more like prose than poetry, but perhaps that was your intention. Altogether, excellent work.